I feel we should help the endangered species because they are just like us in many ways. Yes I believe in creationism but, we are considered mammals. Think it as if we were about to be extinct would you want to do anything in your power to keep us here? There is only to things in the whole world I am waiting to go extinct and never come back. Those would have to be Spiders and Snakes but only the poisons snakes, but all Spiders. I understand that spiders help our environment but the scariness if them is the reason I don't like them. Now a days it seems like a new animal or species goes extinct. The only way we can stop that is to clean up our environment. I love wales but if we do not change things then they will be next. lean up after yourselves on the beach, look into the program SOLVE. garbage and waste is the main environmental problems. So do your part and help make our generation the clean machines.
3 comments:
Kelsey,
One of your talents is your ability to write. I think you have a pretty good mastery of the language and often use it in an artistic way. I still am going to encourage you to improve your ability to argue various topics. I think too often you let your personal views dominate topics that really have a lot of research and statistics which should be dominating in your writing. You have made some good adjustments thus far, but like I said, I am going to continue to challenge you to get outside of yourself and focus on the reality of topics I bring to class and the facts, research, and issues that surround them. You have dreams and aspirations of college. College professors are going to be more impressed with someone who can see the big picture and include it in their writing.
As always, I find you a pleasure to have in class.
Thanks,
Ryan
I like the twist of including us as the "endangered species". It hooks me and catches my interest. Keep writing I like reading what you post.
Eric
For grading purposes: You express your opinion, but use little to support your arguments. 6/10
Post a Comment